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Will I ever be able
to tiptoe with bubble-bath
excitement through
the cotton candy forests
of your heart,

without turning into
a dystopian protagonist
and setting fire
to it?
Being quietly happy with what I have is not something I am good at.
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Given 2011-04-27
The title of O Woe, Cotton Candy On Fire caught my eye and told me in no uncertain terms that I have to share this poem. And the rest of ~pereubuisjesus's fantastic gallery is full of sometimes-thoughtful, sometimes-intense, and always-witty pieces. ( Featured by nycterent )
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SacrificerPS3 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
almost as original as Harlem. Almost. Props to you.
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pereubuisjesus Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Artist
Thank you for your delicious props :)
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SacrificerPS3 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
You should get this published, I'm serious.
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pereubuisjesus Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Professional Artist
I would love to do that one day. Once I muster the drive ;)
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SacrificerPS3 Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
Why wait? You could be the next Langston Hughes.
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akaRoger Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Student Photographer
I love this. It's wonderfully witty and really embodies something that many of us need to work on. (especially me right now)
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pereubuisjesus Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Artist
I'm happy you found it relevant to your life. Thank you for the comment and the favorite. I wish you luck in your self-work :)
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youshakemyblood Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Student General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :D It's about time! As always, Love your work!
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pereubuisjesus Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Artist
Thanks! :) and thanks for...is it the third re-watch?
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youshakemyblood Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Student General Artist
Ahaha. Yeah, idk. my dA keeps removing people from my watch, and when I add them back on it won't save. Sorry about that :p It's happening to some of my friends on here too.
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