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The Way The World Works by ~pereubuisjesus:iconpereubuisjesus:



The way the world works
is like a light switch:

It goes ON

                                  and OFF

from one case of affairs

                                              to another case of affairs


The chemicals shift back and forth,
                                                  
                                                         from and to opposite sides of the brain
Creating two yin yang tones

                                         This is how it goes:

Things are like this

And then they are like that
                   

                                                And then they are like this


             And then they are like that







                                                                             Then They go over there
Then they come back

And hit me

                     HARD




                       And then smother

                                                


                                                   me in a blanket of 1000 kisses

Then it bites me


                                                                         Then it licks me

Then it goes
click click click


                                  Then it's silent

Then it S C R E A M S




                                                                      

                                                                                        Then it laughs

And its a flea



And then

an elephant,
a car,
then a tree

Then it's World War II
                                                              Then it's an amoeba

Then it’s a woman



                                Then it’s a man

                                                      And it's Joseph McCarthy




Then it's Peter Pan


                                           up

                                   up

                         up
                   up
It goes up

And it goes down
                   down
                   down
                   down
                   down


                                  It shifts from a smile

                                                                    to a killers frown

It goes a
            r
            o
            u
            n
            d  and a r o u n d              Then it stops.


                                                                         And rots


                                                              Until it's 1000000000
                                                               years old
                                                                          .
                                                                          .









                                                     But then it's a little baby

And then a giant rat with rabies

A "Yeah!"


                                           then a "Maybe..."

and

It makes me very angry:

On and on



                                                                          Forever and ever                           




On and on




                                                                                     Forever and ever




On and on





Forever and ever




Without fail
©2008-2010 ~pereubuisjesus
:iconpereubuisjesus:

Author's Comments

I tend to see the world in black and white. Its not an original idea. Theres usually two sides to just about everything. Kinda taoist i suppose. I guess the point of this piece of writing is to illustrate that the "two yin yang tones" are present in every facet of the universe; just in different guises.

I give permission to hyperwritersclub to use this deviation

EDIT - This is one of the first and also one of the best things I have ever done. I was looking at it today and I thought it needed some spicing up (structure, HTML etc.)

so here it is: The revamped "Way the World Works"

Comments


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:iconkittynolikeyou:
excalent!! thats spelled wrong isent it, damn it -_-" anywaaayz nice, really. everything is nothing but nothing isent everything, kinda out look.

The way I see it is nothing is black or white, reather it is shades of depressing gray.

really nice job :D

--
I'm an honest liar.
:iconpereubuisjesus:
GRASSY-ASS! lol : )

--
See you space cowboy...
:iconkittynolikeyou:
O_o" zokkkkk

--
I'm an honest liar.
:iconkheb:
This is BY FAR my favorite from your gallery...yes. Wow. What a voice is here. The rhythm, the wild carelessness of it sucks you in--it almost demands to be read aloud, no confidence required; the words by their own selves would command complete attention.

I bow to you. :worship:
:iconpereubuisjesus:
=] I’m really glad you like it. And it is really fun to read aloud. I usually read my stuff very animatedly so that adds to it.

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See you space cowboy...
:iconoveroncloud9:
yea, what kheb said, your voice is extremely pervasive with this piece and can be the deadliest weapon in your arsenal
:iconpereubuisjesus:
Thank you very much. yeah this is the one that most people really like (the reason why it is featured lol). thanks for the comment :)

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See you space cowboy...
:icontalhinxovxl3v1tat10n:
although it may not be an original concept it is definately very interesting and very well written

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So live like you mean it and love till you feel it
It's all that we need in our lives -goo goo dolls
:iconburningbstrawbry:
Well this is quite nice. I know you get told this a lot so it won't matter that someone else is saying it too, but you're a very talented writer..there's something very honest about your work
:iconpereubuisjesus:
Thank you :) I am glad that you appreciate it.

--
See you space cowboy...

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